Please describe the feeling that you had when you were waiting to "touch" as well as the feeling once I dipped your hand in to the vase. You cannot mention the word Jello. It must be at least 10 sentences, using descriptive language and at least 5 similes/metaphors.
My heart was racing, as if i was free falling from an airplane. the only thing i could hear was Diana's faint footsteps grow louder and louder, then the footsteps were silent i can "feel" her standing next to me, my heart is beating faster now, faster than ever. i felt like a character in a scary movie being chased by a man with a deadly chainsaw, the only difference was i was completely still. suddenly she violently yanks my hand and has total control over my actions, as if i was a puppet. she slams my hand into a cold container then my hand finally dives into a mushy substance which feels like she dipped my into in open persons stomache. i can feel the intestines and blood flowing in between my fingers. my hands were then slowly removed from the chilled container i can feel a thick substance dripping from my finger. i try opening my eyes but the blindfold restricts my vision. i can hear the reactions of my classmates, all gasping in disbelief that they are touching this unforgiving substance i can hear the others hand penetrating the surface of the thick, mucky material.
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